Feel free to publish your poems in this topic, in case it happens that you write some.
Here are my dark thoughts of the day...
Welcome to Hell.
Angels are Heaven's guardians,
And Devils are Hell's warriors.
Humans are just barbarians
That God decided to ignore.
So the hordes of Evil are spreading
All around the human beeings...
Now tell me how long will it take,
Before humans realize their fate ?
Oh pal, poems are for women and femalish men. Literature is useless. (Arguement opening message from the adobe)
I agree in a sense CTG!
Poetry is for human beings, not so much for men who just try to resemble gorillas as much as possible. Gorillas don't write poetry.
Krys: I was really impressed with the first paragraph! I didn't know you could write...
Nice rhythm & rhymes too. The last two lines seem a bit simple compared to the first four (?)
By the way, don't worry, there is no god, nobody is ignoring us :)
Quote from: BonzaiJoe on October 23, 2007, 02:09:10 PM
Gorillas don't write poetry.
But those gorillas make science. ;)
Quote from: CTGOh pal, poems are for women and femalish men. Literature is useless. (Arguement opening message from the adobe)
Greatest poets in history of litterature were almost only men. :P
Quote from: BonzaiJoeI was really impressed with the first paragraph! I didn't know you could write...
Nice rhythm & rhymes too. The last two lines seem a bit simple compared to the first four (?)
By the way, don't worry, there is no god, nobody is ignoring us :)
Thanks. :)
I don't worry about any God btw, the first 4 verses just came into my mind, so I wrote them and completed them.
Difference between the 4 first are that I didn't have to think to write them, they just imposed themselves to me, while I had to think to conclude with the last 4 verses. Obviously, my verses are better when I don't think and just let inspiration come. ;)
Regarding writing, I already wrote 4 short stories and 4 poems (apart from the one at the beginning of this topic), all of them in French. "Welcome to Hell" is my 1st writing in English (not counting the joke of "Lord of the Wheels" written some years ago and available to read from ZakStunts website).
For those who understand French, here is the link : http://inlibroveritas.net/auteur2277-oeuvres.html
These texts are published under Creative Commons licence, and are mainly "fantastic" style (like Lovecraft or some Maupassant short stories). If you use an automatic translator, you will loose a lot compared to the original text and atmosphere, especially for "La fente" or "Le bois des ch?nes ?ternels", so I don't suggest doing this.
The poems are different, talking of my thoughts at certain times, good or bad. One of them is talking of my daughter ("En attendant la m?tamorphose").
Sadly, I'm a lousy writer. But I really like to read what other people write. I wrote short stories but only as homework for school or my English learning, and always about a given topic. They always suck but where grammatically correct, so I passed all of them! ;)
Krys: maybe they were men but just femalish/gayish men.
Quote from: CTGKrys: maybe they were men but just femalish/gayish men.
Sure, just like you. ;D
Why do you think that beeing a macho means beeing a real man while writing short stories or poems means beeing gay ?
Maybe DJ is right : you're more animal than human. :P
Quote from: Krys TOFF on October 23, 2007, 08:02:15 PM
Quote from: CTGKrys: maybe they were men but just femalish/gayish men.
Sure, just like you. ;D
Why do you think that beeing a macho means beeing a real man while writing short stories or poems means beeing gay ?
Maybe DJ is right : you're more animal than human. :P
We can argue about typial maleish things. But I'm still waiting for Akoss' opinion. :D
Scientists make the world go round.
Artists give the world a reason to go round.
By the way, I feel pity for those men who try to be gorillas :) Apart from writing poetry, playing music, wearing eyeliner and other femaleish things, I like to watch football games, mosh at concerts, get extremely drunk, play chess etc. I don't feel that I have to restrict myself, and that is really liberating... It must be hard to have to live up to a certain image that someone else created!
I don't have to force myself to be a gorilla. It's a maleish instict. ;D
Quote from: BonzaiJoewearing eyeliner and other femaleish things
Sorry, but I won't wear eyeliner nor other femalish things (red stick for lips ?).
I don't like women with too much make-up, that's not to make-up my own face. :D
But you have to. >:(
:P
There are already 13 replies on this topic and only a few are about poetry or literature and most of them are about gay-macho stuff. BTW, I think art is not gaylish, wearing eyeliner is (just kidding BJ ;)), and poetry is art. Will you CTG call gay someone who acts or plays music?
CTG also wrote poems in secondary school... (about Atta :)) Before I may tell my opinion about the topic, first, I need explanation of this and your opinion, because I discover some kind of opposition between these two. :)
Quote from: Chulk on October 24, 2007, 09:47:39 PM
There are already 13 replies on this topic and only a few are about poetry or literature and most of them are about gay-macho stuff. BTW, I think art is not gaylish, wearing eyeliner is (just kidding BJ ;)), and poetry is art. Will you CTG call gay someone who acts or plays music?
Don't worry, I have no problem being gayish... That's not an insult to me! However, I don't wear eyeliner to be gay (and in any case I only wear eyeliner on special occasions). Anyway, I'll publish some poems in this thread once this discussion has died down!
Just ignore CTG's comments (Though he souldn't say anything unless he 'admits' he was gay at secondary school)
Quote from: Akoss Poo on October 24, 2007, 11:31:12 PM
CTG also wrote poems in secondary school... (about Atta :))
and you can consider it done! I'd like to read your poems, I have a strange feeling I'll like them, don't know why...
That poems were for fun with jokes (about our bloody chemistry teacher ;D) without any artistic value. Even rhymes were weird. ;D
I wrote many (though I know I don't count, as I'm somewhere near 6 on the 1 to 10 scale, where 1 is female, 10 is male), but unfortunately they are almost all lost, and in Hungarian.
Quote from: zaqrack on October 27, 2007, 09:50:35 PM
I'm somewhere near 6 on the 1 to 10 scale, where 1 is female, 10 is male
Zak is coming out.
1 to 10? I'll go below, I'm 5.8 :D
It's clear that Zak is an AMATEUR TRANSSEXUAL. He never wears make-up, does write poetry but not so much about his suffering heart and lost love as I do, and he is not at all ever sexually attracted to males. I am a little bit.
/me is pure 10.0 hetero
:P
Quote from: CTG on October 28, 2007, 02:10:21 AM
/me is pure 10.0 hetero
:P
Thanks for ensuring all the rest of us guys can sleep in peace... ::) :P
As for poetry, I wrote a few short poems some years ago - free verses, mostly about urban life. My artistical bursts of inspiration are rather rare, unfortunately...
Quote from: CTG on October 28, 2007, 02:10:21 AM
/me is pure 10.0 hetero
:P
CTG is in pure 10.0 denial :P
Quote from: BonzaiJoe on October 28, 2007, 02:06:54 AM
It's clear that Zak is an AMATEUR TRANSSEXUAL. He never wears make-up, does write poetry but not so much about his suffering heart and lost love as I do, and he is not at all ever sexually attracted to males. I am a little bit.
now you summed it up perfectly :) this took me years ;D
I am around 12 and this value is getting higher and higher. That means I'm too maleish to accept women. ;D But my dick still likes them - and only them - very much. :)
(Zak Tereskov?t hallgat LOL :))
I have a friend who says a real man is the one who tried everything before deniying anything. If this was really true I wonder how man people in this forum is (except for Lise, of course!)